growing up ..really?

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Jan 17, 2012.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    when i really grew up..the world turned around..
    when i really grew up..i knew that it wasn't really always filled with pleasant sounds
    situations changed ..people changed..life complicated
    and i was still sitting there thinking that cleverness was overrated
    tried to observe everything with an eagle's eye
    all i realized was that i badly failed at my naive try
    the world still pushes me around..
    walks over me and then walks forward leaving smudged footprints on the ground
    i get up again .. i fall again..and then i am lost
    lying down there i try to asses emotion's true cost
    lying down there i knew that this wasn't the place i belong to
    deep within i feel that maybe i was right..maybe they could be wrong too..
    no one cared..they still walk past ..i don't know where..and for what lust
    all i know is that ..i am left behind in a never clearing cloud of dust..
    then i know i won't ever really grow up ..if it meant chasing the lightening
    then i knew i could never really grow up..take me away ..all of this seems so frightening.
    i feel happy in my own little world..it might be a little too simple for you
    but this is where i belong .. this is where i feel complete..this is the world which i really consider to be true..
     
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Good lines... I liked them..
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    good lines, as always..aptly expressed emotions..keep it up!
    (is it in anyway related to the recent hot teenager comments?? :p)
     
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    @rickkyrich ..thnku :)
    @ horsemouth .. thnnku :)
    hahha...naah..not at all ;)
     
  5. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    On the flip side ... you can grow up and bully others
     
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member


    haha..i think im too sweet for that .. ;)
     

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