whatever i do ..is never going to be enough for you

im done..im so done
tryin, cryin, screamin, shoutin
i am done with it all
bt smhow your are so damn strong that none of it pentrates through your ****in wall
i try to please you
you doubt me..you try to see through
you find nthin fishy but still think smthin's got to be tricky
i turn around..fightin back tears
i turn around..keeping deep within unknown fears
i turn around..tryin to shove off the nightmares
i turn around to ride solo..watchin pairs
but how does it matter..we're so through
i just know one thing
whatever i do is never going to be enough for you

 

no replies..!!

 

or maybe d *YOU* neva really cared frm d very beginnin

 

There!
That is the main crux.

Don't try to please anyone but yourself - and all these feelings will go away.


(Sorry I don't really have a knack of poetry - so can't really comment on that aspect )

 

@ alpha1..m tryin hard on dat... pleasin myself..
@ supa admin...hahaha na u r not..

 

Well now to see it from even a higher altitude.
If you really love a person - why do you expect the SAME in return?

Why does it have to be a give and take relation?

(PS: I presume that your "pleasing thing" was an outcome of a complex emotion called love)

 

luk its not relly about expectations..its just that when sm1 loves u wid all ur heart...tries to please u wid all dat he/she has...der has to b smthin..i mean cmon..what i mean to say is..love melts ppl..wat dis poem is tryin to potray is dat..sm ppl do not care...its bout d hrtlessness of sm ppl

nd dis is not d age of being all goody goody..dat u lov a person even wen he hurls abuses at u..

 

Hmmm, so I guess you love your parents, and supposed due to some misunderstanding or reason, they don't agree with you. And you feel that they "ain't behaving according to your expectations".
Or the other way round - the same thing happens to your children.
Or your siblings.

You will "stop" loving them perhaps.
Yeah, right!

Then I believe you should label your "infatuation" or "attraction" quite clearly - and not label it as love.
Love is feeling of caring, affection, etc from YOUR end. Not the person you are loving's end.

What you are talking about is an egoistic selfish emotion. Wherein you expect the other person to reciprocate in the SAME fashion.

 

ok i agree to ur point..but now tell me something..you love sm1...(love=in accordnc of wat u said)...i shud say love sm1 like crazy..nd dey dun giv a damn...wat will u do? sm day or the other..
3 things can happen
1...the person starts lovin u too
2...u give up
3..u cntinue to lov em till eternity widout cmplainin..

i srsly think dat the thrd once is not applicabl today...is it?

 

dats my point..!!
hence u cnt love sm1 unconditionally..so der R expectations..haina?? its pretty naturl..

 

-dual post-

 

1. I really cannot make out what you have typed. So pardon me if I interpreted your english wrong.
2. Please distinguish between love and attraction, as I have clearly said earlier.
3. Love is something you have because of your close relationship. Its not because they are your brothers, sisters or your parents, but because you have been with them, and shared certain things in life.
4. Have you been with this person for certain amount of time? Sharing all the joys and sadness?
Ups and downs in life?
5. What is there to give up if they don't respond back?

Your example of pet is good.
Initially the bond between your pet is master and slave - the pet obeys you because you are essential to its survival: food, shelter, protection from other wild createurs.

But later it becomes a "love" sort of bond - because even if you don't provide these things (food, shelter etc) it will still stick to you.

In any case:

Let me be clear.
1. Love is something that can only happen when two ppl have spent some time together.
2. Love has got nothing to do with the "s3xual aspect" of life.
3. This love can happen between ANY two living creatures.
4. Whatever the OP has written - surprisingly doesn't occur in the love relationships you share with your family members. They can be selfish, not respond back, but still you will love them.
5. So where does the feeling of not getting "love" back arise?
Besides, what will be your expectation in this love-relation? What happens if your expectations are not fulfilled? You stop loving them?

6. More often than not - what OP has written about usually the case of a boy "loving" a girl. Or vice-versa.
7. In these cases, ppl FALSELY label the feeling as love.
8. Its not something from your "heart", but (pardon my frankness) your d1ck. Evolution has primed us to choose a partner for the s3xual activity. Whether you accept it or live in denial - this is the reason why you "fall" for a person of opposite s3x.
9. Initially its plain mutual attraction. And this relation is extremely selfish (and it has to be - otherwise how will it ensure that there is a "result" from the relation).
10. When these two ppl have spent and shared considerable time together, then they start getting bound in the love. And it happens only when there is a compatibility.
11. So the question now is: at which stage do the "poem events" take place?

If they take place during the "attraction" phase, then admit it that its not love right now.
And if its taking place during the "love" stage, then admit that you are a buffoon, who being a masochist, like indulging in things that hurt you, being well aware what sort of person you are getting close to.


And to clear things further up - I would really want ppl to define this "love"

 

u dun need to drfine love..i mean its not smthin dat v define in WORDS..! what wud u call it?? ...a bond...a relation..?? or watever...
it can b expressed bt not defined..nyways...its solely my opinion..

 

You can still define it - if you know what it feels like, and/or what it makes you do.
Anyway I think none of this is going to help the person who feels "betrayed" or "wronged".
So let that person wallow in self pity.