plz try to understand..i knw it ain't gonna mean a thng to u... bt i am sorry ... very sorry just had to tell u dat each nd every word u say seeps thru... wateva u consider me to be..i ain't fake person i am real its just dat may b its my fae or may b its me..dat push me into d pool of dis denial... if i came to knw dat i hurted u....u wt knw hw much more times it has hurted me if i came to knw dat i am d cause 4 ur blood to rise up...fr u to b upset...u wnt knw hw much more times it it upsets me.. oh..i do say dat i am sorry again... i knw even if u say "koi naa" der wud still b a stain... but all i say is dat u knw very well wat u mean in my life everytime i say dis it does not mean dat i am pleadin' u to b der...its just dat dis statement makes me feel more alive... u promised dat u ain't goin' nywher i knw its coz' of me bt its so harsh..nd quick nd bizzare.... u told me everythin' but neva told me wat to do wen u r gone... u never told me wat to do wen smtym u desert me nd leav me all alone...
sorry..bt did u mean it in poetry or in real life..??? nyway in both of dem..i cnt or am not able to help it..
with all due respect to you state of mind I must say this is not any form of poetry, just a way to release urself from suffocation. I wdn't want to say more
frm the looks of it...its too emotional... Can't say much...i feel its good cuz it touches me... Yes, please do something bout grammar, abbreviations and presentation..easier to read through and understand. Though u don't use many comparisions, still... I like your poetry 'cause they're always strzight from the heart.
well then, dun feel bad if i add more rhythmic lines that would make you feel like a g@y leprechaun seemingly unwitting to hide its own a$$
we are here as critique to make our point, not argue what other say. That right should be reserved to "'thread creater" alone.
well i thnk dis is gettin' a bit too far.....ain't it??? i dun' thnk postin' such stuff wud b a gud idea...sorry i knw dat i am younger nd dun' hav a ryt as such to say all dis...bt ...well tk it just as an opinion...plz
@ nandy ... you can post them .... you dnt need to abstain from anything that you believe in. @ rikkirich and horsesmouth ... please aplogise
well well...nobody is apologisin'...it wud b pretty embarrasin' .. after all i am younger...so lets cut dat out plzz...
Well age does'nt tell how you behave. You post what you think is right, some say Aye, others disagree. No big deal. @walkalone Its good u're concerned, for the forum. But there's no need apologising.. He said something, i replied. Not the most intlligent conversation, I must say. @rikkyrich No hard feelings buddy!