luck..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, May 19, 2010.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i worked by the day
    and toiled by the night
    i gave up play and some delight...
    dry books i read
    new things to learn
    and forged ahead
    success to earn....
    i plodded on with
    faith nd pluck
    and when i won
    people called it luck....




    comments awaited...
     
  2. benchwarmer

    benchwarmer New Member

    yaah i know, ask me... :)...let them say, dats all they have...
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    ya i guess so :(
     
  4. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    haha.. nice lines..
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnk u so much..but if i may ask y d "haha"????
     
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    is waitin' 4 sm more cmnts....
     
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    its short and sweet !!!
     
  8. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    nice n meaningful....
    i think evry1 can associate wid tht...
    good job
     
  9. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    well it was an instant reaction.... i smiled after reading it.. thats y.. i loved ur lines..
     
  10. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    oh achha got it...thnx :)
     
  11. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnk u soo much dear... :)
     
  12. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnk u... :)...short nd sweet rply.. ;):)
     

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