Keep me alive For the sake of those glittering moments I donno what is real but Devoured is the feeling when I try to penetrate Rejection is the word that never let me flee It never seemed I ll be dying When u come to save me from being a hostile… So just Keep me alive Even if I do breathe my last Keep me alive coz the best thing is yet to impart Keep me alive coz The sound that takes more than me… The dream that makes me numb… The life that I owe you… I Need to turn in after the drenched fence… I will Try to give in as lost confronted challenges… So just Keep me alive U better Keep me alive coz the next thing is to break apart Please do comment on it... even if u think its a piece of s**t...
@rickkyrich: Thanks buddy, how u doin?& hell yeah its a song...i cant write poetry, watever i write it becomes either S**t or song.
i'm doin fine dude..and don bother much.. write watever u feel like.. try writing death metal lyrics.. will help us
Its good that you are not following a tchnique and soon you will discover your own. you poems are all filled with anguish, and repentence. I would't say that they are GREAT!! and AWSOME!! but they surely make me feel that you write from heart and not compulsion
to tell you the truth and also seeing u guys, i wouldnt a call them even a poem...because i cant write one...dats one thing i do, the way it comes to me i just pass it on...dats the way it is for me... thank u for reading...