This poem is far too deep...and there's something else behind it...but u wont get it so u better not waste ur time in finding the reason out....just read the poem n comment Far beyond any mere eye Was a single candle about to die Something was unsaid; I felt it in the air But all I did was - stare Burning in shades of yellow and blue Trying to tell me what’s wrong and what’s true Darker and darker the night grew So I went closer for the serenest view I sat there admiring its exquisiteness But it seemed to fade in darkness My contemplations was disturbed by a tear And I found myself wrapped in sheets of fear “Wait, oh wait”, I screamed in horror The room was imbued by strange air of terror One pearly tear rolled down my cheek And I felt incapacitated and weak I tried to run but my fear choked me down I tried to run but in worry I was drowned So I shut my eyes and killed it at the right time It was a murder but certainly not a crime Oh poor candle, I did this for your sake Oh poor candle, I had not committed a mistake Oh poor candle, your presence will always keep me strong But you can’t say that all I did was wrong!!!
It may have some meaning for you, but what makes this poem so beautiful is that everyone in this forum can associate the lines with something or the other that has happened/happening in their lives. You have grown of quite some stature Sukriti, well done!!!
Now this is what i call poem... * i knw i knw iknw ..lol* what i get is it talks about the two sides of ur own .. one which u left and shatterd due to the fear of the things around and one which u are to save a dearest part (reffered as candle: mataphor) .... am i right ?? care to prove me worng..haha
Your best lines ever..... this piece just left me speechless.. just awesome! just just awesome! reps,.... \m/ bdw its more than a sacrifice, i guess?.............???
@walk_alone: thank u vry much...well i wrote this poem last moth but i posted it here yesterday coz i ws afraid...whether ne1 wud lyk it or not....but i've got an awesome response @monica: well u r right till some extent...but i told u naa don't waste ur time in tryin to find the reason behind writing this poem!! @nandy: thnx gal...btw hw old r u?? @horsesmouth: getting such kinda appreciation frm u is an honor for me thank u for everything @allstarsband: thnk u ^_^
@ricky: thnkkkkkkk youuuu @pratham: thnx to u too ^_^ @nandy: wow i've found my twin who may/may not luk lyk me but....is of d same age