we make our own Gods yes, that is true in this mortal world once we, depend and borrow during misery and sorrow beg and steal never do we kneel rob and rape in a saintly drape kill to thrill bow to devil's will crave for more feel like a whore sell ourselves in hands of Hades then we, mold and rot repent and regret wither in pain go insane bow our necks to force unseen scream and cry ask for mercy dissolve and vanish in Godly ashes noone stops to clean the drivel of greed we make our own Gods yes, that is true ______________________________________________________________________________ comments are welcome...
that does look like a linkin park hip hop rock.. but its meaningful, n thts wht makes a poetry! keep posting cheers! :beer:
Linkinpark is "nu metal" or "rap metal". the band will kill you if they heard you calling them "hip hop" ;-) anyway thxs for comment
good one.. a little dissconnected but i liked it..some how we all have started writing on thigngs very serious...Y sO SeRious ? ann ?...lol
Its not disconnected, its abstract. Disconnected is the name for verses that donot provide you a clear imagery. If you mean by way I have written the paras then thet is just a "technique" read again you will realise.
So true! Yea, the idea is to keep different ideas seperate. But I still like the 4-8-4-6 line format..hehe
technique totally depends on how the message needs to be passed. It often depicts the mind frame of the poet.
i have a weak vocabo..and lanvajo...X- 74 in english XII - again 74 ...Boss: ...Listen young ...the company wont pay for yoru english tutions... SO what i ment by diconnected was same as u correctly pronounced abstract..\m/
calm down .. you have put your point across. Hope your vocab grows to understand the poetic depths better. cheers !!!
thxs Sukriti .. I dunno why all think its LP stuff ... maybe 'coz its too "against the elements" kinds
well i must accept i imagined LP screamin their balls out wid their weird scratching noises.. nothing wrong wid th poetry though..