I’d a cigarette; you’d the light. We didn’t have to fight. You only had to ignite And I’d share it right. We could’ve had a smoke Later, maybe a coke Shared many a joke And in laughter we’d choke. You said, “Let’s do it. Quick! More than you, I need the kick.” So, I pulled out the tobacco stick And, said, “Light it, chick.” You made the sound I wanted to hear. I said, "Honey, so glad you're here." For a spark, I came near. And you set my world on fire!
Yr odr works r better mate... This ones quite amateurish... Newys, u write rly well... Luking fwd fr sum darker stuff frm u...
next time, try to get past the aaaa bbbb kind of rhyme... this type is rather monotonous. try aabb aabb or even better, abab cdcd type... distorted: looking for darker stuf?? bein distorted huh?