Here's what can be described as a humbly romantic poetry! Unchaste serenade is a long form for xeS Shadows of trees moving around, as time passes by. Nothing to stop the tangle of legs, no one disturbing their unchaste serenade. Cold water caressing their feet, and wet hands feeling each other. They sprawl over the sandy beach, no one disturbing their unchaste serenade. The sky responds to the amorous call, and pours tiny drops of sweet affection. And the falling sun shies away, not disturbing their unchaste serenade. Two hearts of gold combine, to form the red hue of twilight. with no one to disturb their unchaste serenade, They continue their efforts, out of sight...
wow .. atleast feels good in words u described the surroundings more ....can u put a little more focus...lol
I like that rhyme a lot for some reason. And yes, unchaste serenade would literally mean 'not pure music'. Not quite what it means in this context though.
@monica n fireflier Thanks!.... meaning of unchaste serenade.... yep....... unchaste means like not pure, especially refering to virginty in this context, n serenade is related to music of love ...... I've used this in conjunction to give a meaning like music of love which we consider as not good(but which really is pure)......dunno but i feel like s3x is more like music.....pure! I've neva done that so maybe i'm wrong!( ) the word s3x is used as an impure thing in human minds, while serenade here refers to purity as in s3x.... its not a frequently used phrase.....i could've used intercourse(lol) in its place but it'd been to rough a word to form a poetry!
thanks metaldodo.....n double thanks for the reps/ funny that last 3 reps I've recieved hav been only from new guyz... whereva those oldies gone.....huh?
