yea, its me again n my mood a bit sulken....as I waited for 5 long frustrating months to get my chance....and now its coming closer... The egg hatched and a tiny ave looked out, it grew up one day and flew away. As i sat looking out the window, waiting for another day. The sun rose into the sky, and the morning passed into noon. And i sat watching as the night went by, waiting for another day. The days whiled away into weeks, and weeks into months, And i waited for the moment to come by, it might come another day. My heartfelt desires did'nt happen; Wishes made so long ago. Buried inside some dark bottom, into the fathoms below. People say its destiny's ways, and i seem to be a mere puppet to life. But someday this wait shall end, and i'll leave for my voyage, on the path I am destined to, alone and content. Roses, gardens and beaches, the world shall be meaningless to me. Once I have waited another day... I'll be with the deep blue sea. comments??
these were the best lines Its a great poem really, m myself a smalltime poet but you're definitely a good one dude keep it up! you deserve reps!
