dhoondh rahe ho kisi ko vo kahega tumko, and ...she is so swept away with his indifference yaad aati hai... usse bhoolane ki aadat hai and... she is so submerged in thier story.. time guzar jaata hai unn khaali khaali annkoon main and ... she is so determined to find herself.. kuch likh de agar gool soft chote nakoonon vaali ungaliyoon se and... she hides her body from all for many days...
nice poem...atleast sum feamles r makin a foray into the lyrics world...great goin...y dont u make a song...wud be great... nwys keep up da gud wrk
wahy dont you ppl simply say ...bundle ..beekarr ...i wuld appriciate that' be truthful the next time i think this was preety decent and good and best in its jonour
because, most of them probably dropped out of school in eighth grade. They probably think centre = centur, so genre = jonur?
frankly, the poem is'nt good enough.... I have'nt read much of this genre, but it aint pleasin' much......