look what u done, this mess that you created even if some one returns, you will only be hated booring animal if not fear, respect someting throw the dumb eyes, object something its the flesh when chewed given them cramps till they are alive trapped and drenched simple pure joy may be some other kind when you watch them scream fears unwind open the cuts catch the nerves by knives the red liquid is a fluid drink and thrive the slow kill and its joy must not be berated look what u done, this mess that you created even if some one returns, you will only be hated..
the Zeal nice way of putting up thoughts i like the zeal behind these lines .... would be rocking to listen to them with a guitar on .......
i did what i did .... why r u lotterying around, fooling with words...y dont u do some work and put some decent cloths to it
"yay, finally, i like." As if i was writing this for you my lord...fool go to the theacher and compalin... "but seriously, proof-read. you, not u"...i will write whatever i want ...u go and sleep with renin-martin and oxford learners....shut up from now
If you are posting it here, then yes, you are writing it for me. So quit PMS-ing. And its wren & martin. If you dont want people to talk about your shit, then keep it to yourself.
@ Its a cruel poem, really.....I pictured an animal being slaughtered, did you intend this meaning?? n yea, one question, (no offence), are you a vegetarian?? or animal rights activist??
i snapped a man here...hennibal-cannbal kind.... \....animal - devil.../..... and Detritus just shut ur booing crap to ur own dumb box..stay away from my things !
I'll do whatever the f uck i want, you can just f ucking deal with it. It's people like you who only look for praise and won't respond to even the most basic critique, that ruin the community.
^ v^v^v^v Don't listen to what others have to say everytime, you might not always be wrong or right. n who's manu pandit??your real name??!?Hannibal-inspired?
You cant read your poem once before posting? You cant spell 'you' or 'restaurant' correctly? I didn't realise correct spelling was a relative thing.
does'nt matter 'til I can read and understand, i mean spelling mistakes are alryt, only should be readable, n specially if they are done purposely....as in monica's case
It does matter! Anyone will tell you that stupid shit like writing bits in SMS english, messy spellings can easily break the reader out of the flow of the poem. And what sincerity is the poet showing if they can't even do that much?
ok ok...point taken ... but some times, when youreally dont knw the spellings then ? its not logical to think of spellings insted of thoughts !!
you might wanna type the poem in Microsoft Word, it'll take care of that!.... just remember to keep auto-correct on.
^i hate those reds and blueess....the r like trying to flirt ...notepad is no bad Else i alswys got a frnd....Detritus ....*goes searchin detritus where r u*
