i know im getting more than i deserve.. yes just good food and the basics i need but who the hell aspires for more that you show i desire a slow life with lot of certanity... But i feel i wont get it ever in this life cause the reverse is what makes the game intrusting so let take your things or i will throw them out my aloness and me need to be resting..
nice poetry...really a good one... the last line takes us in the deep of the words --- "so let take your things or i will throw them out my aloness and me need to be resting.." ---- i m sorry for unwanted suggestions but I thought it is uncomplete...
aachi hai. Does it belong to u? try song from "daulat shohrat"- kailash kher. @avi.singh : life is not always complete...and our poems resembles our life. thik hai yaar poem aachi hai.