there was once a brilliant dream and fears ignored while i sleep i hit pause to wake, till its time again to cross one more off my list you've forgotten now what you wanted or why you ever crawled out of bed i hate it now because it makes me remember you shouldnt have taken that from me please dont make me wait and still have to stay awake .. written because im bored, pissed, really missing a cigarette, and its only fair that i get critiqued as well. if someone were to get me a bar of chocolate and a pack of smokes, id be much obliged. my own opinion of this is quite low, i find it too discontinuous.
i cant believe i cant think of a comeback for that question. so anyway, no its not, although i dont normally write, i draw. at any rate, this was quite forced say what?
talking to myself I wasn't forced to write it. I forced the writing a little, since I didn't really have anything inspiring me to write.
