your laughter’s like a gentle stream through my heart it flows takes away all the pain cleanses all my woes your eyes are like a kaleidoscope through them I can see all the shades of life around and a part of me your curls are like a shade of tree forever which will stay in them I would nestle akin to bird of prey your lips are like a wildflower longing for a zephyr’s kiss makes me let go of the splendor of the daffodils your slender arms are like liana bit by bit they’ll entangle me till a mellow slumber takes over your rugged love sets me free.
I dint understand the last para...... it means like your arms entangle me till I feel sleepy/dizzy, and then your (rugged) love sets me free..... wats tht supposed 2 mean? rest all is superbly poetic! hats off
That was really good, definitely one of the best ones i've come across here so far. Although 'rugged love' sorta reminds me of one of those corny romance novels with muscular men on the cover =P
^ I wish I had 1(dneirflriG, hehe monica-trend).....so I'd fill up my PC wid meaningful stuff..... (jus kiddin', dont keep such stuff::arents:: @detritus jus cuz she's ur gal...jus watchin' wudnt help, I watch tens everyday.....man when wil I get 2 do something worthwhile
yeah, that would be what differentiates 'boyfriend' from 'stalker' @horse: when your mum decides to find you someone =P
Do you really see some difference ... just try to go back when u didnt had her but only nroP ... can u detail a little, ( seriously ;P lets see what boyfriend see's...) ...u write poetry hope u will be truthfull !!