I've been working on this tune for quite a while when suddenly,I got the end to it.This is just a preview of how the entire thing might sound..I've tried to seperate the verse from the chorus by a few rapid downstrokes.Ignore the major glitch towards the end and please tell how it sounds..and more importantly if it's a rip-off.I'm kinda low on time right now,but if it's good I'll make a better recording with beats and stuff,and work on lyrics too. It's called Reminiscence; https://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=734322
There is not much to say about this, its just some chords played in a certain order. The strumming is nice, the melody created by the strumming is nice too, it seems i heard it sometimes, but not sure about that! One thing i really don't like is the annoying synth in the beginning and it continues in the background, but thats just my opinion! Overall a very nice and good sounding creation, keep going man and take care!
Nah,you're opinion counts man.Actually I've always been inclined towards melodies that can be identified by the chord progression itself,so i can't help the first part.As for the rest,the reason I posted this recording in a hurry is to know if it was copied..coz that's my major concern. All your comments were right,except this isn't the final product..as I said,if it is indeed original and the melody sounds good(which you agreed upon)I'll work on making it a proper song. Thanks!
What's the hi frequency noise? Recorded through a headset mic? The chord progression was pretty nice but I found the melody you played was too generic. Maybe that's why you think it might sound copied. Not much else to say right now since I didn't really get the structure, but like you said it isn't a finished song yet.
Oh yeah,I guess it'll be hard to figure out the structure..it makes perfect sense in my head,but yeah I guess I'll start working on this one.Thanks a lot man..I was worried it would go unnoticed/unreplied. And yeah that sound is after trying the noise removal utility on a headset mic recording..just posted it in a hurry.Will make a better one when it's complete.
this frankly just a bunch of chords....sorry..... make something more out of it and then maybe it'll be an 'instrumental'....... and it aint ripped..... dont worry.....