Were you using a backing track? Was the higher melody a part of the track? or did you record two melody lines?
It's nice...I think it's a little short to be able to comment on to be fair. You're heading in the right direction. I didn't actually like the melody very much....you kinda set the mood for a mournful tune by going slow in the beginning and suddenly jump into a bouncy rhythm so I thought that should change. It's good to see you're using a metronome. However, when you're recording you might want to use a drum machine instead. just sounds a little cooler. Also, is there something wrong with your metronome? It seemed to go off beat in the middle I think.
The melody in your playing needs to come out more. Its just not sounding like a song right now even though your ideas were really nice. It's great to see you've taken the first step to becoming a really good guitarist. This is just something that'll get better with practice.
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And surely you’ll buy your pint cup !
and surely I’ll buy mine !
And we'll take a cup o’ kindness yet,
for auld lang syne.