As the person above pointed out, the mixing could have been done a bit better. The voice wasnt really audible. But apart from that this song had all the makings of a typical stereotyped hindi pop song. Add some drums, bass and other effects and you have a song. I cant really critique the voice because i would like to hear it more. Show a bit of versatility in your singing ability, just not doing a monotone. Overall, i have to say, good effort for a newbie, I can never hope to do something like this. Nicely done!
"While the truncheon may be used in lieu of conversation, words will always retain their power. Words offer the means to meaning, and for those who will listen, the enunciation of truth."
robotpajamas: since Im going to be giving the CAT this year
d_ist_urb_ed: To whom?
robotpajamas: f*ck you