hi bathroom singer,
i agree with vini, the scale is low.
your G and C are perfect, Am is not going well.
frankly speaking i have to hear the song, to tell you the chords.
i will download it and then can come up with the chords.
till then a very good effort, this is not a very easy song.
moreover i checked your previuos post also,when you have decided the key you do not go out of the chords of a key which many beginners do like playing Fm in G scale etc.(just taking an example).
good going,i am sure you would become a good guitarist soon.
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Ek chor nikalta hain, Kaali si sadak pe
yeh awaz aati hain, Chor Chor Chor Chor