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  1. #1
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    May 2010

    Smile those moments...

    she was so close this heart...
    one who bring smile to this heart...
    now she left be without.. giving me a chance to say...
    but it's far too late she was gone away....
    every night this heart cry while going to sleep...
    thinking why every moment has to be so hard....
    my heart fall jst for u n u...
    i don't want this heart to make u lose...
    u was tough so much jst crushing my heart...
    thinking why those moments gone so wide apart...
    jst give me a chance to make u love...
    jst give me a chance to make u mine...
    although this heart never shown u this love...
    but jst give me a chance to make me right...

    it's not complete yet...still poetic sense is wanna share to ask for some additions to make it better....once it's complete then me and guys gonna get it on our guitar...

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    horsesmouth is offline IGTIAN
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    Jan 2009
    okay FYI, this is the wrong place, goto the poetry forum, where ppl wud actully read n appreciate/comment on tht.
    I've hung around and I've taken my time,
    I've beat the dust and kissed the grime;
    Stand I shall, not for you though,
    Its just me now, wherever I may go.



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