From a real layman's point of view, i found everything acceptable, except the vocals. A few lessons would come in handy in expansion of range. From what i can hear (and i could be terribly wrong, the quality of the recording isnt that great), the vocalist is just trying to push his chest voice, he needs to create a bridge to his head voice when nearing the high notes.
"While the truncheon may be used in lieu of conversation, words will always retain their power. Words offer the means to meaning, and for those who will listen, the enunciation of truth."
robotpajamas: since Im going to be giving the CAT this year
d_ist_urb_ed: To whom?
robotpajamas: f*ck you