OMG!! i'm in love ..with your voice.....
this is your first song i've heard and you have a wonderful voice dude...
Sometimes its so hard to get the right words and the right tune....
you've done a great job..
at one point i felt there should've been more of music in between but its good
the words and the music and the voice make it perfect
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes