Next time lay down a click track or your percussion before your other tracks. The backing guitar was completely off time.
The backing loop was decent. The lead was okay, but didn't seem to have a real structure. You didn't really finish it, it just sort of ran out of time or summat. Really out of place notes at 1:55, 2:00, 2:17. Then again if you recorded it on the spur of the moment then these things will happen.
I like the tone, what gear are you using?
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