i did some doodling around with guitar yest (okie ... i simply jam with myself) n came up with this:
two feedback are required:
1. Intro Lead: do they sound good enuff? ... does it gell well with the intro rhythm?
2. I tried doing some Dorian at around 1min10sec, i know it sounds a little off initially, but does it manage to come back to normal?
3. U can comment on the rest of the crap too ... but as i say .. the rest is really crap!