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  1. #1
    kooldudemax is offline Beginner
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    Jan 2007

    Arrow Self composed song!!!

    Hey ths song is my self composed song.....its nt all set still i cudnt wait 2 get comments frm u all exceptional musicians out dere....
    here it is...

    wud b waitin fr sum helpful comments....

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    soothes the mind and gives it rest ,
    heals the heart and makes it whole ,
    flows from heaven to the soul...

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    sukrut is offline God Guitarist
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    Somewhere in time
    dude i loved the song! esp the high parts! little out of sur....

    i actually listened to this song 4-5times....the starting part you could just pluck and keep singing very softly......then add a bit of a prelude then start the song....

    please post the lyrics and the chords you've used...

    but keep going and add a few more lines to looks very short....

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    Keoraf is offline Keyboard Player
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    As Sukrut already said, there are some Sur faults here and there, so try to improve it. And i also agree, try to add some more lines on this track!
    In my opinion, you used too much delay, i should decrease it a bit.
    Overall a good track and i'll wait for the whole track, keep going and take care man!

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    Jo Be Taala Hai
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    Nice composition man. Work out some more. And did you use two voices as is seen or its echo mixing. anyway its the mukda part which carries the song. the antara needs some variation. and dont use too much yeah and ohh...
    its not that it looks bad but too much of it takes away its shine. may be its my own personal opinion. good job. work it in full. and as the words are urs u can add anything u want according to ur liking.
    Any Quotation is only as important and useful as its reader makes it out - including this one.

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    pravin4u is offline Beginner
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    nice melody
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    vineet_guitar is offline Newbie
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    hey its suprb....ROCK ON!!!!!!!



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