Nah,you're opinion counts man.Actually I've always been inclined towards melodies that can be identified by the chord progression itself,so i can't help the first part.As for the rest,the reason I posted this recording in a hurry is to know if it was copied..coz that's my major concern.
All your comments were right,except this isn't the final product..as I said,if it is indeed original and the melody sounds good(which you agreed upon)I'll work on making it a proper song.
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock