you need to have some chord progressions. it's just percussion but not music. seems like you have a pretty good sense of melody. i can help you out with a few nice easy chord progressions if you want. i think it'd be cool
if there is a gap between the finite (us) and the infinite, music at least makes one believe not only that there is an infinite, but that he can reach it -- for he can feel it. fire, bliss, and conviction are the plants arising from seeds of music. music is a beautiful, beautiful thing.