Nice. The biggest problem I can see is something rather vague and something I hate trying to explain since it makes me feel like an elitist.
The time factor. In the words of my guitar teacher, you're certainly ON time but are you IN time? The rythm of your melodies gets predictable and at times you have some beautiful melodies going which would really be "there" if you got the flow right....as of now, your flow is choppy and uni-dimensional at places yet at others you've got a Satriani-esque feel to your melodies(take it as you will). You definitely get a lot better towards the ending minute of the recording.
You should also consider letting some beats go by....especially at those high notes where you're resolving.
Not related....out of curiousity, are you the guy who used to be Jayanth?
I loved your tone and the melodies you created. Keep your recordings coming.
And surely you’ll buy your pint cup !
and surely I’ll buy mine !
And we'll take a cup o’ kindness yet,
for auld lang syne.