I like that you recorded the rhythm first here :D I love the lick at 0:43 - 0:48 a lot...that is definitely something you should keep. At the faster parts, I thought you weren't really in control (were you?) and sometimes it sounds a little off time. I like the overall triplet feel to the whole thing as in how you seem to be playing in triplets for the most part.
Sorry I took so long but I haven't been online much in the last few weeks. Finally unemployed now
And surely you’ll buy your pint cup !
and surely I’ll buy mine !
And we'll take a cup o’ kindness yet,
for auld lang syne.