its really great to see that even the beginners are working real hard and are coming up with recordings. good job ! but i would suggest that u listen to the original song a couple of more times and then u might also realize that u've recorded a totally different version, which is unique ! guitar rhythm is different, u dont have control on tempo, which ultimately is resulting into an average recording. its good to see ur attempt, but i'd suggest that u should still work harder before any future recordings ! peace !
.........and the music keeps on playing !!