therez some chaos in it now...maybe u cud refine the stuph to reduce some chaos...I think the chaos is becoz of the lack-of-polishing part as pointed out by Apha1....
If u were to ask me, I`d say pick an acoustic and play something instrumental....if u`re game to tht, there are lotssa nice stuph around.... On electric, well I`d tell u to try "Eugene's Trick Bag" but thts damn tough, though I think thts like the best solo I`ve read technically....
Gear (in order of acquisition):
Faith Naked Venus Acoustic Electric
Yamaha C70 Classical
Gibson Billie Joel Armstrong Signature Series Les Paul Jr.
Pluto Acoustic Electric
Stranger Cube 20