i cud hear da original song being played in da background. u werent comfortable 4m da part tu dhoop hain,jam ke bikhar.............. i kno its kinda difficult to sing coz its in high pitch but wht u can do thr is overlay it wid choruses.tht wud sound better coz tht's da way it is in original song. also da chords during tht part were not sounding correct.which chords did u use thr????/ Bsus4 Em G A and then Bsus4 Em G F#7add11 is da correct chords progression during tht part!!!!
god of guitar 85 (My cover versions) -