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    composition of fewlines of poetry...PHIR BHI NA nimishaa


    posting the track composition of few lines..of poetry posted by nimishaa.. titled as phir bhi na poetry and lyrics forum......

    last stanza are composed...........lut chuke hai rang saare

    a bit rusty may be.....and i need comment too..i will be happy in your criticism too


    the link is
    all of us at some point will experience robbing of innocence or spirit-weakening of that time it seems horrible or at least diffficult but later on you will hear people say that it was the best thing that happened to them becoz it clarified who they are & what life is to them. it puts us in touch with deeper things.
    two people can see the same thing,disagree and yet both be's not logical;its psychological

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    composition is good rohit...
    ur guitaring n voice r great...
    but some of my words..needs to be changed to fit into tune..
    like.. maatam shud be replaced by gum..

    i feel..this song shud have been a bit slow..n wit sad voice.. after was a sad song...

    these r just few modifications i wud like.. the rest of the work is awesome..

    i know how difficult the job create something wit originality...
    u got full marks for that originality...
    after all IGT has atleast few people who prefers to be creative....doing something new..!!
    my best wishes for you..
    नमो सुरस्वयंसिद्धा, नमो नादस्वरुपीणि I
    नमो ब्रम्हांडध्वनिर्मयी, नमो तस्यै नमो नमः II
    ----------- निमिषा-----------------



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