last night my brother came up to me.. and showed me something he wrote. i was really touched by this ghazal... i planned to compose it to some thing.. listen to it and tell me if it clicks... no music yet.. just the audio.. will compose music if it sounds good ..
most people in here are into pop and mainly rock.. but everyone according to me has a taste for everything.. lemme know if it works
Dil meN tanhaa.ee ka dar aaye to achchaa hogaa!
dard ye had se guzar jaaye to achchaa hogaa!!
Aaj ki raat katii bhii to katae gii kesae
Aaj ki raat guzar jaaye to achchaa hogaa!!
YooN.hee be.kaar KhayaaloN meN simataa hae kehaaN?
In KhalaaoN meN bikhar jaaye to achchaa hogaa!
Dard ka chaaNd bhataktaa hae sar-e-baam-e-falak
Merii aaNkhoN meN utar jaaye to achchaa hogaa!!
Woh miraa Khoon k jugnoo sa fazaaoN meN uRae
Zeest kii maaNg ye bhar jaaye to achcha hogaa!!
Mere khaaboN ki qabaa, Ghazal ki raa'naa.ee le.lae
Yeh tiraa husn saNvar jaaye to achcha hogaa!!
Heres the audio