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  1. #1
    such is life is offline Newbie
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    Nov 2012

    what to do what to do?

    I'm new to this whole forum posting lyrics and feedback thing.
    but heres a poem/lyrics/i dont know that i wrote yesterday when i couldnt get the damn thoughts out of my head
    so here it is

    I don't know what to do
    when all I've ever known was you
    it all seemed like such a fun game
    until you left me to deal with

    the shame
    the blame
    the pain

    you only looked out for your own selfish needs
    never cared for the ones you let bleed
    like a coward you just ran away
    you'd think you're the victim
    with the way you behaved

    like a child
    in denial
    you're always on trial

    never at fault
    for once in your life
    could you be an adult?

    you never took the time to look
    thought you could read everyone like a book
    acting like a master at hand
    you're just a puppet being led cross the sand

    and it really hurts me to see
    you're not the man i thought you to be
    you're just a scared little boy
    sulking when you cant have your toys

    but i hope one day
    you'll see yourself with open eyes
    and stop living in your silly lies
    find out who you really are
    stop wasting your potential
    when you've come so far

    and maybe thats all i ever saw in you
    was the potential you never saw through
    instead you waste it on the feeling of hate

    hate for yourself
    hate for your life
    hate for the people
    who've only tried to fight

    fight for you
    you just give up
    its nothing new

    treating life like a batlefield
    thats all we're here for
    using offense as your defense
    will only get you so far in war

    until you take the time to know yourself
    you'll always be scared of the world around you

    keep walking down the path your on
    and it will be to late when someone finds you

  2. #2
    monica_decosta is offline Composer
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    Oct 2006
    i liked it !!!

    you really are very close to this person simply have you detailed the personality of the guy in words ...i thought you would end it like " i wish you keep drowning in your meaning less indulgence and die in some corner" ...but u still seem to care !!

  3. #3
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    horsesmouth is offline IGTIAN
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    Jan 2009
    its good...
    and the ideas are flowing awesomely!
    it looks like the style is inspired from linkin park..
    I've hung around and I've taken my time,
    I've beat the dust and kissed the grime;
    Stand I shall, not for you though,
    Its just me now, wherever I may go.




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