Sorry if this sounds kinda rude but
"I pray if we ever stop loving,
our heart's stop beating too."
This line quite confusing.I assume you're indicating the depth of your love but who's to say the love from the other partner is just as much as yours?
And who's to say if your partner breaks up with you for some reason,you'd still "pray" that both of you die???
But being in the all so romantic Valentine's Day mood I don't think any1 will be cynical enough to notice that...
Again,its a very nice poem.
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock