I don't know what to say.It's my first poem here and AI'm semi nervous that its silly, semi nervous its stupid...I guess there must be all poets in this forum so plz recommend any changes....
Dekhar hi usse
Milta tha sukoon
Pyaar ka jo
Sar par chad gaya tha junoon
Ajeeb pyaar tha woh
Har pal Bhagwan say yahi maangta tha
Saath mere n ho toh bhi
Woh khush rahe yahi chahta tha.
Is hi bar Bhagwan ne sun li meri
Fir bhi koi sheekhwa nahi
Uski yadon mein
Akele asoon pi liye maine
Lekin aaj bhi yahi maanga iss dil ne
Woh jaha bhi hon khush rahe
Kismat mein likha ho to jaroor milegi
Pyaar sachcha ho to jaroor milegi
Tab tak is dil ki har dhadkan
tere khushiyon ke liye duaan karegi.