This is exactly why I love flipping back through the old pages of this forum...
A wonderful write.The end of each stanza is so compelling..seriously,I'm out of words...
The phrases are excellent and they simply add details to the situation..
"Comfort, is not what I seek
All alone with my thoughts
And cobwebs of memories
In the shadows today,
I choose to remain. "
The only thing I failed to understand is why is she/he not willing to to change today??If you do read this,I would really like to know why..And again I'm assuming she's asking all this to herself,isn't she?
I did not appreciate the phrase "is it okay?" because it causes a conflict of opinion (considering the reader is being asked)..I mean I would say,no its not okay if you change tomorrow b'coz tomorrow shows uncertainty..if you want something done..do it today.But then some1 may say its okay.This of course,is assuming she's not addressing herself,in which case the above lines are meaningless.
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock