Hey Very Nice thought, emotions put together.If you do not mind i have some suggestions here for vocab.I know writing hindi in english alphabets is not easy but works like "suljan"-can be written like "suljhan", same for uljan-uljhan,sein-se.
2nd stanza cab be better put together for the fear and excitement of proposal to that special person.
Mujhse hindi movie song yaad aa gaya: "Chupaana bhi nahi aata, jatana bhi nahi aata/humein tumse muhabbat hai, batana bhi nahi aata."
ANUM *****Do Good, Be Good and Feel good******
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When I do good, I feel good; when I do bad, I feel bad, and that is my religion.
WHATEVER YOU ARE, BE A GOOD ONE.