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    still waiting....


    posting my poetry titled as" still waiting.."

    i walked along the path,
    smiling for those who watched me,
    acknowledging the pain as gift
    thinking as destiny ..
    with numbness and silence beyond belief
    why me? asking my heart
    everytime why i am the scapegoat?
    walked on with my thoughts..

    i cried when the reality sinks in me..
    my world crumbled
    my dream becomes frozen ..
    tears poured out through me..
    like the cloudbursts....
    deep down i was at my lowest ebb.
    the sincerity with i made the edifice
    broken into pieces..
    survival was priority..i survived
    still walking on the path..
    saying to myself
    that was not the only worst i faced..
    there are many more in pipelines waiting..
    and ..
    if destiny is willing i will...again
    pass the test of my determination

    just walking alone..
    leaving the past dreams..untouched by future

    walked thru hardest days......and still waiting...still


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    thats gr8 rohit....
    element of experience in it

    im not so good at english.. but tried few lines, seeing urs...

    nobody is destined to walk alone..
    for the distances one have never known..

    there is someone to hold your hand..
    when u stumble upon, to make you stand..

    to see the world when you close your eyes..
    to wipe your tears, to hear your cries

    to walk through miles, to make you smile..
    to take a step ahead, when u stop for while..

    for ur every pain, someone will care..
    so dont walk alone, someone is there..

    let ur heart go wild,let ur doubts get clear..
    just take a look here, someone is near..

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    gr8 work astro

    (but yeah, like vini said in ur other thread "who am i?", do check for grammatical errors)

    reps 2 ya!


    nice work gal, ur english seems fine to me

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    thanks to nimishaa and cryptu...who are more expressive in imagination
    for giving comments...

    all of us at some point will experience robbing of innocence or spirit-weakening of that time it seems horrible or at least diffficult but later on you will hear people say that it was the best thing that happened to them becoz it clarified who they are & what life is to them. it puts us in touch with deeper things.
    two people can see the same thing,disagree and yet both be's not logical;its psychological

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    One more gem out of you Rohit very nice..

    @Nimisha you too have written very well and your english is good too..
    you have the talent girl
    Gathered here in so much love
    Hearts are so entwined
    Gifts of love we think of now
    Words so filled with rhyme
    Love we will always share as
    Friends are by my side
    Constant beauty in my life
    Friendship now resides

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    great work man! reps for u!
    .: is it just |\/|E ... or is it the \/\/0rLD? :.

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    Hats off to u rohit n Nimss



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