Treat urself well dude.. whatever it was..
i know a zilch about whatever may have happened
but surely feel it wasnt your mistake..
Dont be too harsh on yourself..
Now about the poem... it is well written, and you have a good imagination
Do write more in hindi, you are good and can do better..
What does ta-umra mean?.. sorry but i'm not that good at hindi
jeet na saka jo, main ta-umra
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes