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  1. #16
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    i'm_not_neo is offline el valor máximo absoluto
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    This is quality work...deserves reps.
    "I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."

    "So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
    And only God knows why..."

    Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock

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    @ i am not neo... THX A LOT MAN! always lookin fwd to ur comments... almost forgot about this poem...
    .: is it just |\/|E ... or is it the \/\/0rLD? :.

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    Hira, I love you girl! I don't know how you can be 16 years old and write like this and I swear I wish I had a bit of your mind. Just don't give up writing...ever! I realize I'm commenting after almost a year and I never say anything different from what I've said today but're good at this.
    And surely you’ll buy your pint cup !
    and surely I’ll buy mine !
    And we'll take a cup o’ kindness yet,
    for auld lang syne.

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    #iR@ is offline GANDI BACHI RELOADED
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    ^*speechless* ummm... errrrr....

    *starts jumping of happiness*

    wow dat was one hell of a comment! :P thx man... u made ma day! oh and guess wat i'll be working on? one of those common wealth essays AGAIN... remember COLOURS? hahahhaa... will be posting it here AFTER i av ritten it so u can add to it! hehe
    .: is it just |\/|E ... or is it the \/\/0rLD? :.

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    Gulf Coast area of Texas 40 miles south of Houston,Texas USA
    I ran into a stranger as he passed by.
    "Oh, excuse me please" was my reply.
    He said, "Please excuse me too; wasn't even watching for you."
    We were very polite, this stranger and I.
    We went on our way and we said good-bye.
    But at home a different story is told,
    How we treat our loved ones, young and old.
    Later that day, cooking the evening meal,
    My son stood beside me very still.
    When I turned, I nearly knocked him down.
    "Move out of the way," I said with a frown.
    He walked away, his little heart broken.

    I didn't realize how harshly I'd spoken.
    While I lay awake in bed,
    God's still small voice came to me and said,
    "While dealing with a stranger, common courtesy you use,
    But the children you love, you seem to abuse.
    Go and Look on the kitchen floor,
    You'll find some flowers, there by the door.
    Those are the flowers he brought for you.
    He picked them hisself, pink, yellow and blue.
    He stood quietly not to spoil the surprise,
    And you never saw the tears in his eyes."
    By this time, I felt very small
    And now my tears began to fall.
    I quietly went and knelt by his bed;
    "Wake up, little man, wake up," I said.
    "Are these the flowers you picked for me?"
    He smiled, "I found 'em, out by the tree.
    I picked 'em because they're pretty like you.
    I knew you'd like 'em, especially the blue."
    I said, "Darlin', I'm sorry for the way I acted today;
    I shouldn't have yelled at you that way."
    He said, "Oh, Mom, that's okay. I love you anyway."
    I said, "Baby, You know, I love you too,
    and I do like the flowers, especially the blue."

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    oh look, we have a necromancer in our midst. decent poem anyhow.
    doesnt afraid of nothing


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