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  1. #1
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    Amanush... is offline Tanha Rahi...!
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    Mar 2005

    ' She Is With Me...! '

    She Is With Me…!

    I have often divided my lunch with her.
    She knows all of my dreams,
    my ambitions, my dark days…
    Often however I don't really know
    what to tell her,
    because She puts me to uneasiness.

    There are mornings in which
    She drives me mad,
    because She is not invited,
    yet She introduces herself
    with the first lights of the dawn…
    She walks all day long by my side
    in the middle of the crowd.

    At times however I have also loved
    and desired her more than any other things
    as when gazing at the splendour of nature
    or while listening to some good music.
    She has seen me crying for an ended love,
    for some sad thoughts…
    I believe that lot of times
    She has endured pain for me.

    Once I have seen her caressing
    a dead leaf fallen on the ground…
    Another time I watched her running
    after my sighs…always silent and discreet.

    While persons in love
    are kissed and embraced,
    She is with the others...
    with those who crave for some love.
    When the world is closed out alone
    and the night is ready to knock at doors…
    She is there awaiting…
    on a ****ow soaked with tears.

    At times she is beautiful as an angel,
    at times ugly as sin…
    but She is always a Lady …
    and She is called …



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    #iR@ is offline GANDI BACHI RELOADED
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    WOW!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!
    .: is it just |\/|E ... or is it the \/\/0rLD? :.

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    souman_das is offline Tabber
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    Dec 2004
    hi amanush,
    i am spellbound.
    do not know what to say?
    are you the reincarnation of shakespeare?

    i do not know who you are but god bless you whoever you are.
    you almost made my eyes wet.

    Jab andhera hota hain, Adhi raat ke baad

    Ek chor nikalta hain, Kaali si sadak pe

    yeh awaz aati hain, Chor Chor Chor Chor

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    madhuresh is offline madhuresh
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    very well versed maza aa gaya reps added..
    At times she is beautiful as an angel,
    at times ugly as sin…
    u culd have rhymed it with some thing....phir bhi sundar aati suundar !

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    -Other side of the Horizon- you wouldnt wanna be there..
    and Awesome it is!
    i was kept wondering till the last line who "She" was
    lovely lines Amanush

    Tk care

    Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
    Where life and its ventures are laid,
    The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
    May see us in sunshine or shade;
    Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
    We'll trim our broad sail as before,
    And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
    Nor ask how we look from the shore!

    Oliver Wendell Holmes



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    walk_alone is offline **~~| An Atheist |~~**
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    Dec 2005
    New Delhi,India
    To be honest i had to read it twice to really understand it...........and every line of ur poem made me think and wonder.
    Absolutely amazing and well written
    Kudos to you.
    Its better not to have an honor that u do deserve than to have one that you dont.

    If you are not living on edge then you are consuming too much space.

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    need I say More? reps 4 u .....
    where's my siggy?

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    Redmond, WA
    great!!! @amanush




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