*did not hunt this one down*
Honestly,the first 3 lines were a bit cheesy for me..but I guess everyone does feel the same way.The last line of the first stanza caught my attention.The second stanza would be on similar lines but equally effective.
The rest of it was of course well written.But more importantly you have this style that I often envy in people.You seem to say a lot with a few words.Not that this one was "short" but you've skipped all that HAS happened yet hinting what may have happened.A lot is left to imagine.And I'm glad you don't really care to rhyme.
(Would like to know the titles of the other ones you wrote if you don't mind)
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock