i liked the theme,
reminded me of the Black Friday opening scene
which was superb..
coming to the poem..
the expression of feelings or emotions whatever one may term them as, was very subtle i felt...
if one wanted that person could've made it as gory as possible
But you being the poet,you've got your poetic freedom...
and maybe thats the way you like it..
its nice when people have variations in their poems
and can write on different themes..
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes