Friend. I liked it.
I think this is your imaginary writing and not real..(have been asumin your other writings as well, so pls tell me if am wrong)
And as far as the writing is concerned...you* feel left, betrayed and dont like her for she rejecting you..right? though you work for the upliftment of women...you "OUTBURST" at your beloved for hurting you,...and you, as any possessive lover, have acted in haste...though you are a person much respected in the society for your works and a blessed son of blessed parents.
*you=central character in this.
and now you, Rohit...the reason i refered this as a writing and not a poem cos there are certain elements that are essential to be called a poem...and that are missing.So, if you work on that and see to it that are present there's nothing like it.
The themes you have portrayed till now are awesome!!! Nothing more to describe them.
Hope you like this criticism and appreciation...pls tell me if i am wrong anywhere...
"Positive pictures come from negatives developed in the dark.So if you ever find yourself in the dark understand that God is working on a very beautiful picture."
let live and live.
knowledge for thyself is not wisdom, sharing it is.
you backstab and you die.
never say die and never lie.
before you say,"I can't", say, "I'll try."
one who thinks of doing it in one of the days, does it in none of them