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    Post new leaf

    this new leaf on the vile
    for a while
    hiding behind grill-ends of window
    wispers the monsoon has brought some wetness
    makes admire the shine of youth
    the freshness of yellowish vains
    fingure tips are too rugged to touch
    so caress her lips over the soft, slippery tender offering
    cherish the heavens spending

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    good work....but short.....try adding some punch to it bro.......


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