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    nandy0894 is offline IGT Addict
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    my unexpressed love....(poem)

    i stare wen i hear ur laughter 4 its like chimes
    i stare at those lips 4 dey move in a flow of sm rhyme...
    ur eyes twinkle nd i know ecstacy
    i feel it nd den i am far away 4m all worlds misery...
    i bless dat wind dat blows ur hair away 4m ur face
    i bless it 4 it sets my love ablaze...
    my heart skips a beat wen u suddenly luk up at me
    i stand still...i freeze too overwhelmed to go away or to flee...
    u stare a me nd i tremble
    u want me to say smthing..but to say a word i need my thots to assemble...
    u smile nd move away
    i dun even blink nd watch u past sway...
    i know dat i'd never b able to say nythin'
    i can only hope dat u understand .... all my unspoken unheard unflowed tears...nd my unexpressed love....

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    monica_decosta is offline Composer
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    i liked it.. :P

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    walk_alone is offline **~~| An Atheist |~~**
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    wow!!! flows like a river, amazing imagery ... and this is something that everyone can associate themselves with. Love it.

    Just one bit of advice ... dont use short words like "dem" for "them", "wen" for "when", "4" for "for", it really kills the poem and is not correct way of expression.

    waiting for another one from you.
    Its better not to have an honor that u do deserve than to have one that you dont.

    If you are not living on edge then you are consuming too much space.

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    sukriti_hats is offline Beginner
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    the poem's sweet
    Definition of 'HUMAN BEING' : A creature who cuts trees...makes paper...and writes "SAVE TREES" on it!! :P :)

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    nandy0894 is offline IGT Addict
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    thnx a lot all of u..nd yes "walk alone" i'd definately keep that in mind!!!!

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    prathamjain is offline Newbie
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    really nice

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    definitely good! keep posting!
    n yea....i agree with walk_alone...
    I've hung around and I've taken my time,
    I've beat the dust and kissed the grime;
    Stand I shall, not for you though,
    Its just me now, wherever I may go.

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    nandy0894 is offline IGT Addict
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    Quote Originally Posted by prathamjain View Post
    really nice
    thnk u dear...



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