A nice write...overall it was good..I did feel that you rushed in on the ideas though..
"The playing in the monsoon
and the making of paper boat.
Fighting for every single mark
in all the exams we wrote."
You see you've placed to completely unrelated ideas here..I found the paper boat part unnecessary b'coz that gives you an image of your early childhood..I don't think I ever made 'em after 2nd and we never fought for marks at that age..Anyways this is just my opinion,its not that its wrong..
As I said overall its good...
We were all the same
with no bada no chota.
Never knew about the terms
called 'reservation' & 'quota'.
Though there's some "Hinglish" there,those lines are good...
"I feel like I'm number one,yet I'm last in line..."
"So I think I'll keep on walking,with my head held high...
And only God knows why..."
Only God Knows Why - Kid Rock