theres a lil conflict aswel as resolution
i like ur poem dharmatma
it has much more meaning than is shown ... mayb beyond the grasping power of some people
but very easy to some at the same time
n u need not use punctuation, i believe in poetic freedom....
hope u should too
para's stanza's verses!!
u define n mould ur own poem!! not others views!!
if these are the lyrics i'd love to hear the song.....**batting eyes**(smiley aint here)
Thus drifting afar to the dim-vaulted caves
Where life and its ventures are laid,
The dreamers who gaze while we battle the waves
May see us in sunshine or shade;
Yet true to our course, though the shadows grow dark,
We'll trim our broad sail as before,
And stand by the rudder that governs the bark,
Nor ask how we look from the shore!
Oliver Wendell Holmes